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September 1, 2002
Totem Poles by chaosboy is a heart felt echo of what many may be feeling these days. Truly the best of one of deviantART’s brightest poets. [sent by faithwalker] (Selected by +skyorange)
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Literature Text
Totem Poles
Eleven
Polluted by our visions of fallen empires
Echoed through shattered glass
And the thought that flinging yourself from the top floor
Was a reasonable alternative.
And his yells are flustered by the highest decibel silence,
Her screams muffled by
The remaining desire to tell her kids she loves them
And the breakfast dishes she’d never clean.
Frenzy falls to tapestry
As the world paints assorted colours on the tips of flames
And watches the banner of the free world
-Burn-
Fire crackle
Incandescent blood speckle
                Highlights
And the sudden realization that
                                                        today will be remembered
We watch on CNN
                  (they plummet in real time)
and in-between satellite relays
                  the world is painted with broken glass
scars etched by an itchy trigger
                  finger
that knows to squeeze. Never pull.
Totem Poles of our fathers
                        Built on the heads of tomorrow
                        Forging ahead for today
And split by jet exhaust and a metallic nose
                        That cuts like a knife through our patriotic flesh
Personified by the pain in her childish eyes
                        And baby fingers
That hold onto her latest fleeting memory with the force of
                        The hydraulics working a hundred feet away.
                                                Revenge
Is hypnotically intoxicating
                However far from reach
And our fingers move to press the little red button
                                                      Firing vessels for our hatred
                at a place we couldn’t even find on the map.
Eleven
Polluted by our visions of fallen empires
Echoed through shattered glass
And the thought that flinging yourself from the top floor
Was a reasonable alternative.
And his yells are flustered by the highest decibel silence,
Her screams muffled by
The remaining desire to tell her kids she loves them
And the breakfast dishes she’d never clean.
Frenzy falls to tapestry
As the world paints assorted colours on the tips of flames
And watches the banner of the free world
-Burn-
Fire crackle
Incandescent blood speckle
                Highlights
And the sudden realization that
                                                        today will be remembered
We watch on CNN
                  (they plummet in real time)
and in-between satellite relays
                  the world is painted with broken glass
scars etched by an itchy trigger
                  finger
that knows to squeeze. Never pull.
Totem Poles of our fathers
                        Built on the heads of tomorrow
                        Forging ahead for today
And split by jet exhaust and a metallic nose
                        That cuts like a knife through our patriotic flesh
Personified by the pain in her childish eyes
                        And baby fingers
That hold onto her latest fleeting memory with the force of
                        The hydraulics working a hundred feet away.
                                                Revenge
Is hypnotically intoxicating
                However far from reach
And our fingers move to press the little red button
                                                      Firing vessels for our hatred
                at a place we couldn’t even find on the map.
my dedication to september 11th.
I apologize for the sudden influx of submissions today. Deal with it.
I apologize for the sudden influx of submissions today. Deal with it.
© 2002 - 2024 chaosboy
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I really do enjoy how so much emotion and such a range of thoughts are presented in what happened as such a rapidly passing event. Everything just seemed to happen without anyone realizing time lapse. Bravo. Very good descriptive language!