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Gossip
Chris Serio
09/27/02

Can I tell you a secret?

Words formed carelessly by the flapping jaws
Of teenage girls, captured in slow motion close-ups,
The death of us all,
Or at least the death of the boy they prophesize about,
His eyes sullied into their sockets and shoulders shrugged high
To form anything but a glamorous silhouette.

No one holds any particular distaste for him,
It’s just so bloody easy
So why not wreck him?

Self improvement is important after all,
And her ego suffers from a lack of bolstering,
Regardless of how many crass lips
Have faked I love yous.

It’s fun to victimize
And graffiti the soul with verbal spray paint,

Each new one hundred and twenty three pound shrug shouldered
Tight eyed close lipped awkward walking
Example of God’s image,
A canvas waiting to be a mural and colour coded to the 10th degree,
The social masterpiece of the modern day,
Of modern man.
More ostentatious than the backwards diary of Da Vinci and his inquest,
More perfect than the Sistine chapel painted with inverted dry brushes
And restored by forty thousand ambitious art students,
Nowhere near achieving the applause earned by the easily appreciated excellence
Of a perfect rumor,
Tacked into vertebrae with a safety pin
And scribbled on a yellow post-it note.

Giggles lining hallways,
Hollywood “lone ranger” scenes romanticized for today
And edited accordingly so as to not be overly offensive.

Generation children connected umbilical
To a television set,
Motionless as they’re cut in half.

Whatever faded whispers echo his frantic iris
Have simmered to a rolling boil
As grammatically incorrect phrases dance along telephone chords.

Did you like, see his face?

.
.
Generation Children…
Look at what we are.


Did you hear the news?
©2002-2009 ~chaosboy
:iconchaosboy:

Author's Comments

Inspired by a conversation with Daniela.

She really is my muse, beyond a shadow of a doubt. I oughta bake her a cake. :P (Lick)

Different for me, I think.

Enjoy?

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:iconbruisedapple:
Oh my God I love it!

It should be entitled "A Day At Daniela's School" I'm so tired of these fake and phony smiles that are exchanged for some shard of news, that can be distorted for the amusement of a lunch table full of girls. There has been altogether too many conversations that I have been involved in that have trashed someone else. Makes me sick to think that I could be one of THEM; those evil half-witted giggling, crying, screeching, poser teens.

"Giggles lining hallways,
Hollywood “lone ranger” scenes romanticized for today
And edited accordingly so as to not be overly offensive"

GRR!


"Whatever faded whispers echo his frantic iris
Have simmered to a rolling boil
As grammatically incorrect phrases dance along telephone chords.

Did you like, see his face?" [

--
~As I said before, I never repeat myself

That's right. You heard me.
:iconbruisedapple:
SHOOT!

It cut off some of my comment... and it was so witty too! At the end I finished off with:

Your friend and mine, Amelie.

--
~As I said before, I never repeat myself

That's right. You heard me.
:iconpisschrist:
jesus christ chris.

how do you manage to do this?
no person can breakdown a topic like you can.
you take it to the bottom, where everything is dirty.
leaving nothing to sugar-coat.
nothing to help wash it down.
raw in the least.

wonderful.
+fav
:icondelasally:
Yeah, I went to a private school. Where everyone knows your business, even if it's false. I can relate to this.. and way to go. I agree, no one can break a topic down like you.

--
Mon Dieu! Il se déshabille!!

Qu'est-ce qui est brun et collant? Un baton!
:iconrainangel:
wow, this is really a great work of art. the world needs more down to earth people like you to tell them what's really goin on
:icontcrud:
i hate people like that in school.

"Generation Children…
Look at what we are."

it's sad isn't it.
:iconcooper:
wow. an exceptional piece of writing here. *dreams he could write this good.* take care my friend... :O (Eek) and keep up the wonderful writing
:icondrippingblood:


Chris I loved the poem allways seems to be among girls that talk all the shit -- but guys do it worse. i may be wrong. so much truth is contained in this poem. good job my friend.

:iconrobotmafia:
No. Not different. Perfect as always. Bastard.

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