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Daniela (Kinda like the Weezer song Jamie)

So,
You want a poem do you,
A shameless self promotion type thing
(they say self improvement is masturbation),
but you know me,
I’m more than willing to oblige
(not the masturbating part…ok, so maybe).

There’s something about you,
You know, that special something,
Kinda like when someone smells really bad but you aren’t sure what they smell like,
But it’s special.
You’re like that, except you don’t smell bad.
(You smell great, actually. Like flowers and morning dew, usually).

I think that the word goddess,
Used in conjunction with words like ethereal,
Beautiful and elegant and mysterious, were just put into use
For a girl like you.
Well, girl, not really, I see you as more of a woman (but you still act so wonderfully childish sometimes).
That pouty face you make is probably the funniest
Yet sweetest and most charming thing I’ve ever had the pleasure of laying eyes on.
Really.

Your legs,
Those “Meeeeow” yet “gasp” legs that go straight to the heaven neither of us believe exists, like they’re wrapping themselves in clouds
And stars and vapor whispers.

I love your hands too, actually,
Tiny and fragile as they are, like a little kids.
It feels like holding the hand of a beautiful little child,
Your skin as soft as a baby’s butt (and it really is).
Your chipmunk cheeks that everyone scorches you for,
The bad haircut you always claim to have
(no stylist could ruin you if she wanted to),
the freckles on your face that seemed to place themselves exactly where mine are,
just on opposite sides (look at the one beside your nose,
then at mine, next time you see me),
the dark eyes and they’re endless spiral into your mind
(the mind that spills through your teeth, no matter how tight you clench them),
the soft and serenading voice that I adore,
the amazing way you say “heeey!”

As beautiful and fragile as you may seem,
You still manage to make me feel safe
In your arms, in your perfect hug that I could just lie within for years
And not care about the life outside I might be missing.
I really wouldn’t.

It’s all so much better when I’m with you.
Life just lends itself to colour when your standing at my side.


Wait a second, was this supposed to be some sort of love poem?
©2003-2009 ~chaosboy
:iconchaosboy:

Author's Comments

Just a little bit of fun and joking and what not for Daniela, to whom this is most obviously dedicated. :) (Smile)

She made me submit it. and she hasn't even read it at the point of submission. *lightning flash/thunder crack*

I feel devilish and somewhat evil.

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:iconalcoholic:
A very nice dedication Chris.
The ending was classic.
And etc.
Very well executed, and well-displayed.

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I. Read.
II.
Contemplate.
III.
Revolt.
:iconignite:
the way you described things in this is so..real. no fuss, just straight forward. i don't know any other way to put it. well done.
:iconinvisiblemma:
the jokey honesty in this is such a clever way of showing your intrisic trust in her. i love this. maybe i'll change my name to daniella and pretend it's about me. or i'll just fav it

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pimp me bitch
:icontorn-pages:
simply beautiful chris.
:iconmattspire:
Screenshot -- is she smelling her panties? hmm It alarmed me to the point of illiteracy, and I couldn't even understand the first letter of the poem. Actually I read it all, but I'm putting up a front. *Jimmies the door open with a fruitloop*

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//album art | posters | flyers | book covers | apparel
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my newest piece
:icongustoboy:
in thomas hardy's "Tess of the D'Urbervilles" he uses the word ethereal more than 8 times. i stopped counting at 8 and decided it wasnt worth reading.


sorry, iive been thinking of that since i read the word up there in your poem.

i really like this. its so sweet. it would make a really great monologue, actually. for a skinny little endearing guy. Thumbs Up


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"I am the Almighty," trumpeted the everlasting fish.
:iconfallacies:
Hah, this is just great and classic. Laughing my ass off! :) (Smile)

Excellent job on all the little humor and touches :D (Big Grin)

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Reach out and touch me, your hand is warm.
:iconcryptorchid:
heehee, love that ending. A great poem, funny and touching. excellent :D (Big Grin) though now I feel like challenging you to a duel... Giggle
:iconspittle:
I always feel like such a pervert after reading something like this. So personal, you know, something that seems like it should just be between you guys. And then I come over and ogle and slobber all over it. I'll have to keep in mind to come back and see if The Apple That Is Bruised will leave any comments.

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